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My love poem

Sun Jul 27, 2008, 10:55 PM
An angel before me
so handsome and tall
wears a devilish grin
and a casual remark

Ever so smooth
but with a few noticable flaws
yet gentle and tender
making me fall

I love this angel
so blissful and true
he has captured my heart
way more then he knew

Though distance apart
separates us so
my love for him only grows

To hold him near
to keep him mine
is ever a dream
so heavenly divine

A sweet kiss
a soothing caress
always knows how to take my breath

Stay with me
love me so
keep me near
and never let me go

Tell me that you love me
and tell me that you care
Forever be my love
For never will I share

From the past
to the present
and future to come

Keep your warm hand in mine
sweet kisses and tender sighs
Forever and ever, please be mine

I love this poem......I honestly do....the original was really sad.... so I re-wrote it to this. Its really sweet.....and beautiful....Its one of my favorites that I have written... it has a really nice meaning to it, but right now to me its pointless and doesn't make sense heh.....oh well. Whoever reads this I hope you enjoy it.....cause I can't.....Just give me a heads up on what you think about it if you haven't read it yet....Thanks.....

  • Mood: Isolated
  • Listening to: zeromancer
  • Reading: texts
  • Watching: my idiot sister
  • Playing: nuthin
  • Eating: nuthin
  • Drinking: saliva

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  • Current Residence: K-town
  • Interests: ANIME!!! & DARK!!!!
  • Favourite movie: Final Fantasy Advent Children
  • Favourite band or musician: Breaking Benjamin
  • Favourite genre of music: J-pop, J-rock
  • Favourite artist: Yukiru Sugisaki, Kaori Yuki, Matsuri Hino, Yuu Watase, Bisco Hatori, and many more ^ ^;
  • Favourite poet or writer: hmmm... can't remember
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  • Favourite game: dont make me choose T__T
  • Favourite cartoon character: ANIME! GET IT RIGHT!!! and Its Dark
  • Personal Quote: Life comes and goes you never know when someone you love will leave you so live life to the fullest

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:iconoshidark:
thanx for the fav :D

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Thanks for the faves and watch!!! :D

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:iconhavanese:
Nice gallery :) But I think you should probably remove your avatar, since it belongs to *Go-Devil-Dante. (unless you have her permission, in which, sorry and never mind me!).
:iconsquall-kaihane:
TAG! (sorry T^T)

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:iconkaze4dono:
Heh heh heh I aint got 8 friends and I aint gonna post this thing and its okay^^

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:iconsquall-kaihane:
Thankies for the fav! Anee-chan
:iconkaze4dono:
your welcome XD

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"life comes and goes cherish every moment of it with your family and friends, cause you never know when someone dear to you will leave, so I say live your life to the fullest but still be cautious ^ ^

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:iconholloweidolon:
many thanks for the fav ^_^

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